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the new me 8:1
Once Madness calmed everyone down he sat down on a rusty chair. They all started to look at him "I'm going to make this as fast as possible. My name is not madness, well originally." madness says.
Oscar is now feeling the wound of the knife. 'How long am i gonna stay up?' josh asks "so, what's your name then" "oh...names Alexios.....or defender."
Maria sitting right behind Oscar moves to his side "oh i wanna here this story" she says. Alexios replies to her "later, anyways there were other spirit like zeztuz and i." he chokes up to hide a tear. Joshua is right behind Alexios, patting his shoulder "it's okay" josh says to the saddened man "your right, that story's for another time" josh sits back on the bench. Alexios picks up hos story "anyways there was also a guardian in that well, most places with spirits has them." "why do we need this information?" Oscar asks sheepishly. "It's because Connor's parents were investigating it with 'scientific intention' to capture some special items
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the new me 8:1
Maria wakes up from a night of bliss....to an annoying alarm clock. *BEEP BEEP BEEP* she pounds on it breaking the screen. Not knowing what she did, she goes to the bathroom to freshen herself up for the day. Minutes pass by 'I wonder what's on my to do list' she asks herself as she slips on to comforting clothing. She walks through the hallway to the kitchen for breakfast.
She was in deep thinking before she was interrupted by her two little brothers. 'Hm....kids.....' she thought to herself.
She walks to the kitchen to see her mom in the other part of the house watching tv. Maria walks over to her to give her a pat and morning kiss but as she went to pat her mother, her thoughts went into Maria's mind. 'I need to take Jose and Manuel to the dentist'. Maria backs of immediately. Her mother notices and responds "mija what's wrong?" Maria responds "oh nothing." Maria get a cups from the cabinet.
While she was pouring herself some coffee she hears the tv from the other room. "BREAKING NE
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the new me chapter 7
Connor immediately flash steps away in frustration. 'SHIT, what now zeztuz?' Connor asked to himself 'we need to retreat, NOW!' Right when their conversation finished another wave of black nearly smacked Connor.
Josh notices how vulnerable Connor was. He bends down in a leaping stance, but Oscar notices, he disappears for a split second only to reappear in front on josh. "I told you to not worry, take care of juan." Oscar orders to josh. "Let me help you" josh replies as he grabs Oscar's shoulder.
"No nee-" Oscar was interrupted by his senses. He shoves josh to the side only to see a bolt of lightning in his place. 'Oh shit' josh thought.
Josh gets back up seeing Oscar in Connor's direction. Oscar turns his neck and orders to josh "Get your brother to a hospital, get yourself checked as well. You don't look so good either." "fine" josh replies.
Josh flash steps towards Juan, he's ready to pick him up. Juan clings to his brother shirt. "If this place goes down, get the bag of gems, hilt
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the new me chapter 6
Josh in dazed and confused "WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU?" josh asks Connor. Connor ignoring josh completely asks him "seen Oscar?" josh was confused by this, *why does he want Oscar? Does he have a connection with him?* josh took too long to reply.
Connor became impatient, "HELLO I'M TALKIN' TO YOU" he yells as he kicks josh down further along the smooth cement floor. Josh flew back to the wall, he notices his right silver knuckle next to him. Connor notices his next move (Connor's head) "Connor hurry take his life before he tries something" Connor flash steps towards josh. Josh had his eyes on Connor just in case, but now....he doesn't notice him until the last second where a bolt of lightning struck down seconds before he appears. At this time josh has the knuckle on; not unleashed though. Connor has his hand in a one handed gun motion, at the tip of his index finger a tiny blue bolt in shown pointed straight towards josh? Josh had nothing left, he's done for. "Too late, this is
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the new me chapter 5:3
(Maria's p.o.v)
She looks out of her window in her tiny room, she notices how dark and lonely it's been getting since the break. *should i call them* she thinks as she's holding her phone. Across the hall her mother hollered at her "better not be on that phone of yours". Maria replies "fine". She changes her clothes. As she slips into her pajamas she wonders what she can do to help out Oscar *if only i can help, maybe i can ask josh or Connor tomorrow*
She jumps to bed and passes out immediately. She enters into her dream. She only felt flames scorching her, yet no pain. She opens her eyes to see josh with metal plated Spaulders and a long sword. "Whoa this is a weird dream?" she said jokingly. Josh gets ready in a one handed stance "shut up madness" he flash steps to Maria, josh grabs onto Maria's face and with exhilarating force he pushes her to the wall ready to slash down. Maria couldn't move, stuck in time "it's me Maria" she said in her own voice this time. Josh dropped his blade
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the new me 5:2
(Connors p.o.v)
The smoke clears showing only a ghost like entity with a dark blue aura in a shape of a human from waste up. With no hair and only white eyes and a vicious grin. "FINALLY" the ghost bellowed "you ask for power, only one problem another life force strong similar to me is the only one to kill you." the ghost said. "I ACCEPT IT" Connor returns "JUST A PESKY TARGET." Connor finishes. "Very well you know bear the powers of a god" the ghost says. The ghost like entity entered through Connors right arm, white enters his colorful eyes. "Oh.....now i know who it is" Connor says in a deep harmonic voice. "I need some bait to get him."
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Meanwhile Josh immediately runs to the office where a wooden box is beneath the medal desk.
Josh gets the box and opens it up. It shows bright silver knuckles with carved wooden buttons on the end where the thumb can press. Josh puts on the gloves and bolts back to the basement screaming
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the new me chapter 5:1
Days pasted since the incident. The others left Oscar alone for the rest of the winter break so he can *cope* with madness. Josh going to help his brother's store, Maria going to her parents as well as connor. Although he said he was going to be with his family no one has heard from him since.
Oscar now alone was wanting to know what he should do with his new *person* in his mind. He decides to go to josh for help.
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He arrives later after a long walk to the store. Oscar enters noticing the shop was empty as usual.
A tall hispanic man goes right up to Oscar "are you one of Joshua's friend" He bellowed. "Um why yes i am" Oscar said with fake confidence. "JOSHUA YOU GOT A FRIEND HERE" the tall hispanic man yelled. "Give me a sec" josh says in the back of the store. Oscar waits in an awkward manor, long seconds pass. "Hey man you feeling bet- OH GOD" josh yells immediately, noticing how tired Oscar is. "What do you think i got th
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the new me chapter 4
(In Oscar's mind)
Oscar wakes up in a barren land with only mountains in his line of sight. Except for a cloaked man in the distance walking towards him slowly. "Well this is your place, not bad just a little empty in my opinion" the cloaked man said. Oscar only barely hearing him still wondering who the cloaked man is. "Hey i thought in my mind i thought it would be i don't know maybe...MYSELF" Oscar stated. "Oh you still can't add it up." the cloaked man said as he was taking of the hood of his cloak, only doing it slowly "you asked for feelings, here you go, i represent insanity, hatred, sadness, and despair. But you can call me....." Right at that moment, Oscar finally saw it. Almost the exact same mask that oscar had only it had more lines across to show detail. By this Oscar was frightened to see this, he was astonished because not only the well works, an entirely new entity entered to his mind. "MADNESS"
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Once Madness calmed everyone down he sat down on a rusty chair. They all started to look at him "I'm going to make this as fast as possible. My name is not madness, well originally." madness says.

Oscar is now feeling the wound of the knife. 'How long am i gonna stay up?' josh asks "so, what's your name then" "oh...names Alexios.....or defender."
Maria sitting right behind Oscar moves to his side "oh i wanna here this story" she says. Alexios replies to her "later, anyways there were other spirit like zeztuz and i." he chokes up to hide a tear. Joshua is right behind Alexios, patting his shoulder "it's okay" josh says to the saddened man "your right, that story's for another time" josh sits back on the bench. Alexios picks up hos story "anyways there was also a guardian in that well, most places with spirits has them." "why do we need this information?" Oscar asks sheepishly. "It's because Connor's parents were investigating it with 'scientific intention' to capture some special items and relics in the bottom of the well, but our guardian stopped them but killed himself in the process." Alexios states. "I remember now" juan sits back up. "My mother and i were there trying to stop them but they didn't listen. Worst part was that they brought Connor along in the ride." "Ah so you were the one who saved him." Alexios says indeed, but now i realize my mistake" juan finishes their small talk.

Oscar finally worn out of pain walks towards Alexios . "so he just wants revenge?" Oscar asks Alexios as he was leaning on the wall. "Oscar, are you okay?" Maria asks. "I'm good just tired." as if on cue he falls. Alexios walks and checks on Oscar "c'mon you need a doc- " he collapses as well.
Maria startled and worrisome asks juan "what happened?" "they're were away from each other for too long" maria asks again "what do you mean?" juan thinks for a quick second "imagine alcohol withdrawal but you really need it for your survival"

Josh gets out of the bench leans over towards Oscar's body. Pulling the dagger out of his body, Alexios's body turned into black smoke and entered into Oscar's body. "Go call the nurse maria, we're gonna stay here for a while.
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Connor's walks through the street of an infamous place....mad dog district. He enters an old warehouse, turns on the lights to reveal wall to wall of mechanical weaponry. 'You have power yet you use mechs.' zeztuz states out 'you don't need this' zeztuz electrocutes Connor. "WHAT'S THAT FOR?" zeztuz replies in full voice "you're to ignorant, I'm taking over."
the new me 8:1
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Maria wakes up from a night of bliss....to an annoying alarm clock. *BEEP BEEP BEEP* she pounds on it breaking the screen. Not knowing what she did, she goes to the bathroom to freshen herself up for the day. Minutes pass by 'I wonder what's on my to do list' she asks herself as she slips on to comforting clothing. She walks through the hallway to the kitchen for breakfast.

She was in deep thinking before she was interrupted by her two little brothers. 'Hm....kids.....' she thought to herself.

She walks to the kitchen to see her mom in the other part of the house watching tv. Maria walks over to her to give her a pat and morning kiss but as she went to pat her mother, her thoughts went into Maria's mind. 'I need to take Jose and Manuel to the dentist'. Maria backs of immediately. Her mother notices and responds "mija what's wrong?" Maria responds "oh nothing." Maria get a cups from the cabinet.

While she was pouring herself some coffee she hears the tv from the other room. "BREAKING NEW" the news reporter said "during last night a horrible accident happened to the 'supernatural shop' in west centerville." Maria was confused and interested by this. "Mom turn it up" she says as she walks into the living room again. The news reporter continues. "There were three suspects to the incident the two store owners Joshua and juan mendez and Connor bach. But police state that Connor is still missing while the brothers are in the Preston hollow twenty four clinic." Maria drops her mug, having it all shattered on the floor her mother was startled. "What's wrong with you?" then as she picks up the big pieces she looks back up and notice Maria crying "i'm going out.....to see a friend" Maria said half hearted. "Fine go take the bike." she walks outside towards a figure with a blue tarp. She unravels the tarps revealing a silver motorbike.

Back in the house the co host news from the network. "We have also received news that former resident of 'mad dog' district and now rehabilitated Oscar lopez was also in the scene. I just hope he didn't murder anyone."

Meanwhile at the clinic Oscar is in the waiting room. Sitting down on a bench hunched over with a hoodie to block his view as well as others won't see him. 'Madness.......what happened' he says to madness 'you nearly died, you can't control me we're too alike, we need to be in sync' Oscar replies. 'I don't want to be stuck with you is there anyways you can get out of me' a sudden pause, the room grew colder. 'There is an old story that might help' madness says.

Oscar felt a slight a tap on his shoulder. Oscar swatted the hand out of the way. "I don't want to talk to you." the person replies "it's me Maria" Oscar was startled and stood up to see Maria. He hugs her. "Whoa, you okay man?" he grabs her shoulders and puts space between them. Maria realizes the hard grip on her shoulders. Not to mention the extended height that Oscar gained. She looks up to see him crying "so much shit happened last night, i went to josh's place for help and Connor...... I don't know but....he.....changed." Maria was confused. "What do you mean?" She asks. Oscar replies "i think he went to the well because he wasn't the same........he was like me."

A nurse pauses their conversation "Juan and josh are okay now....you can see them now"

They both entered the room to see Juan lying on the medical bed on his laptop with reading glasses on while josh was sitting straight up across the room, he was covered in bandages all over is stomach. "God the room is cold" juan says not noticing Oscar and Maria. "Um...hello.....glad to see you're not dead" Oscar says interrupting both brothers train of thought. "Oh hey glad to see you're good as well, Oscar." juan says as he closes his laptop. "No not really, I don't want any attention so i just came and waited on you guys." Oscar says. While he was talking, Juan was signaling josh to get the dagger out of his bag. "See look" oscar taking of the hoodie revealing two massive scars on Oscar's bare body. Josh slowly walks behind Oscar ready to strike. Maria backs up "AH i don't want to see" Oscar replies hysterically "don't worry me and madness hav- AH SHIT" Oscar stopped talking when a cold blade went to his back. Immediately out of his chest a black aura flew out of his chest, landing out of the floor. The blob started rising to a human form. Oscar's eyes widen. The human had identical clothing as Oscar only a white mask with red marks.  

"Ha ha ha" a low laugh comes out of madness's new human form. Oscar is on the floor in pain "calm down" juan says it's a revealing dagger only meant for this so calm down he won't kill us, just keep the blade in" Oscar replies "fine" he slowly rises up face to face with madness. 'What should i do..... I should take him down....for them.' Maria thinks of a plan. "So apparently your friend Connor met with another soul.....zeztuz." madness says as he finds a seat to sit down. "But why?" josh asks madness. "Well he asked for revenge" Oscar intrudes. "I remember why, a long time ago like.....eleven years ago Connor's family were-" madness was interrupted by Maria charging towards him she tackles him down with all her force. She mounts him ready to strike " WHOA MISS CAL-" madness got punched right in his face. Maria's right arm starts forming ice shards from her finger tips. She's ready to strike again, her arm stopped by Oscar holding onto her arm "what's in your hand?" she dismounts madness standing up head down. She extends her arm and drops a light blue gem. Oscar bends down to get it for her, only to notice his sisters initials on there. "How did you get this?" Oscar asks angrily. "I'm sorry i had since that one time we went to your apartment, it felt like it was calling out to me." Juan notices what they were talking about "Oscar pass it over" Oscar responds "why should I, it's mine" he notices Juan's concern. He tosses the gem. Juan catches it, he opens his hand to see it. He notices the initials 'oh Felicia, why you out of all people' a single tear starts running down his face. "This is the one i gave to your sister, the day....." Maria asks "what day?" madness grabs her shoulder from behind and leans over to her ear "the day she died." meanwhile Oscar says in frustration "you were the one who gave me the katana then" Juan was confused, he replies "it was meant for her, i needed a person to help me out." "in what?" Maria asks out of nowhere. Josh replies just as random as her "for the S.N.R.A, the Super Natural Rehabilitation Agency."

"It's nice that we're playing catch up but can i tell my story...." all in silence until Oscar replies "go ahead, i need something else to think about"
"Thank you" madness says. He begins his story.
the new me 8:1
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Connor immediately flash steps away in frustration. 'SHIT, what now zeztuz?' Connor asked to himself 'we need to retreat, NOW!' Right when their conversation finished another wave of black nearly smacked Connor.

Josh notices how vulnerable Connor was. He bends down in a leaping stance, but Oscar notices, he disappears for a split second only to reappear in front on josh. "I told you to not worry, take care of juan." Oscar orders to josh. "Let me help you" josh replies as he grabs Oscar's shoulder.

"No nee-" Oscar was interrupted by his senses. He shoves josh to the side only to see a bolt of lightning in his place. 'Oh shit' josh thought.

Josh gets back up seeing Oscar in Connor's direction. Oscar turns his neck and orders to josh "Get your brother to a hospital, get yourself checked as well. You don't look so good either." "fine" josh replies.

Josh flash steps towards Juan, he's ready to pick him up. Juan clings to his brother shirt. "If this place goes down, get the bag of gems, hilt, my laptop, and the revealing dagger." Juan tells him this as he passes out. "FUCK MAN" josh yells. He runs upstairs to get the items.

Oscar appears right behind Connor. Grabbing the hood of his hoodie, he pulls him down with a driving force. Connor couldn't move due to the excruciating pain he lies on the floor. Oscar falls down with his blade pointed right between where his eyes meet "Connor why would you do this, after all this time, we accepted you and helped you out." Oscar asked him. Oscar was blinded by a bright light. He feels his necked being gripped. His back against the wall. He opens his eyes to see Connor holding him up with his left hand while having a pole of pure lightning in his other hand. "Revenge" Connor replies "that doesn't make any sense" Oscar says to Connor's answer. "THEY KILLED MY PARENTS AND LEFT ME TRAUMATIZED" Connor yells at Oscar face to face. "They didn't help them, you out of all people should know this" Connor continued.

A jolt of memories flooded through his mind. Oscar couldn't move, he just stood there......frozen. 'So you and i are identical?' madness asks in Oscar's fragile mind. 'Yes' Oscar replies.

'I don't know how much longer i can keep this strength' zeztuz exclaims. 'No need' connor replies.
He pushes Oscar down still in shock. "Good luck man, your the only thing that's keeping me away from revenge and rule." he throws the bolt of lightning to the roof of the basement, hitting a thin pillar. The structure itself was weak to make a massive hole revealing the night sky. Connor leaps out of the building. The building started to cave in.

'Oscar...?" madness asked. No response. 'OSCAR GET UP NOW' still nothing. Madness had to take control. Rocks and metal plates fell on top of him.
He blasts the stuff out of the way with a flick of his finger. He leaps out of the building where connor did. He overshoots it by landing on Connor's wind shield of his camaro.

Josh drags Juan put of the building "hey, you alright?" josh kept on asking juan repeatedly. 'The damn emergency clinic is too far too walk.' he spots Connor's camaro. "Well look at that" josh says to himself. He slowly drops Juan. Josh opens the bag revealing the items as well as the brothers weapons.  He pulls out his silver knuckles, he puts it on, and immediately punches the side door to the camaro. 'How the hell did i get stronger?' josh asks as he enters the car with his brother.

Minutes pass by josh finally got the car jump started. He slowly backs out. He stops immediately to see the shop fall and cave in on itself. "Oh Juan you are not gonna like this when u wake up" josh says to himself. "Too late" Juan saying that right next to josh. "AH....WHAT THE SHIT MAN" josh was startled but relieved to see his brother okay. He hugs him immediately. "Whoa this is new" juan accepts the hug. "Look up there" juan says as he notices a light blue light flying out of the shop. "Look something else flying out from there" josh says. "Yea.....in our direction too" juan replies. "I wonder what it i- " josh was interrupted by Oscar's body hitting the wind shield. "AHHHHH" the brothers said in unison. "No no no no" josh said. "WE KILLED HIM." Oscar rose up with a pale body....all white. "This is it brother.....we're gonna die now" Juan says to josh. Madness walked over to the broken window. "FUCKING TAKE US TO THE HOSPITAL NOW." "you're not going to kill us?" josh asked. "Nah you seem too important to Oscar" madness says as he enters the car. He sits down in the back. All silence...."so......nice moonlighting here." madness says.


They drove to the clinic in awkward silence.
I just wanted to say hope people are enjoying this
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